It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Children’s education has been a crucial issue in a country for a long time, and it is essential for parents and teachers to help youth to distinguish bad and good behaviors. From my point of view, certain suitable kinds of punishment can be used in the progress of a little child’s growth, especially in telling good deeds from bad ones.
To begin with, children are easily affected by the actions and behaviors from the peers,classmates and friends around them,so they will imitate their bad habits like smoking, school bullying,drinking and so on, therefore this will result in the deliquency ,even crimes of the young students if they can not be under proper control. Additionally, the youth will not realize his fault and bad deeds if they are not punished by his father or teacher. Take Li Tianyi for example,he was forgived for many times by his parents in terms of some really serious problems like gambling and beating others with no reason,so he was put into the prison because of raping a girl in a beer bar when he was only 12 years old. This can be avoided if his family members use some ways to stop his slightly bad behaviour in the beginning.
However, not every kind of punishment can be used for all children,and this must be applied case by case. Firstly, the moral and body insults are absolutely not supposed to be used for educating children. Parents and teachers ought to ask the real reasons and listen to the 8-year-old boy after the lovely guy who stole his tablemate’s money instead of just beating him. Secondly, the adults should take some suitable and useful ways into consideration,which are moderate and generous. For example, a child can be asked to do housework like cleaning the floor after he or she said some dirty word to others.
In conclusion, punishment should be allowed to use in the education of children due to its values in protecting the youth doing serious crimes and deliquency, which is significantly useful in making children understand the gaps between good and bad. But the adults are surely to choose some suitable ways of punishment which are educational and generous instead of only beating them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, as for, for example, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85675675676 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78683249484 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559459459459 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.7965767798 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.230769231 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4615384615 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146172822822 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570786251814 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311533645755 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989768409759 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157495010508 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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