In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Living is always a crutial issue for people from the old times to now, and the problem has become more important in recent society as the price for either owing a house or renting one has increased stably in most countries. Therefore there is a debate that people should whether buying a house or renting one.
As far as i am concerned, the first reason for the problem is the high price of housing,especially in many developing countries like China. What is more, in some countries, the land for building is not enough for the whole population to live as the state is too small.
Some people hold the view that owning a house has advantages compared to renting one. It is obvious that people can live in the house forever when he or she buy it. And the house becomes a part of his or her own wealth, so people can use it conventionally and permamently. But people have to pay the rent every month or year if you choose to rent a home, and the standards of house quaility and living surroundings may not suit one's requirements.
However, this is not to say that buying a house is always sure to be better than renting, as renting a home has its special advantages. First of all, for students who study overseas, they do not have to buy a house, and renting is a more suitble chocie for them. Additionally, renting different houses or living in a number of areas may enjoyablel or more exciting for those who do not like staying in a place for the whole life.
In sum, whether owning or renting a home has its advantages, so people ought to consider their needs when facing this problem. And people in different countries, or at different ages, will change their chocies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Suggestion: buys
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, first of all, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53770491803 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60886793148 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524590163934 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5131288531 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.461538462 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263316485798 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100176443903 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431722898648 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146201675287 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021549224246 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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