Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Globalisation has made the world a global village. Modern technology and inginious methods of communication between people acorss far and near places has made this a reality. At the same time, what people purchase has changed over the last few decades.
It was thought that what people bought was mainly influenced by their local culture and beliefs. However, as more and more people are exposed to international cultures,fashion and cuisines, this trend has gradually shifted. Nowadays people like to acquire products of international labels locally. As a result many of these international branded stores can be found in all the continents regarless of whether it is a developed or developing country. As long as there is a demand,which is commonly seen in the developing world, these shops will continue to prosper.
In my personal experience, I know of many women who aspire to own a branded Italian made luxury handbag like a Gucci, Prada or a Dolce & Gabana . They will goto any lengths to acquire one even though they can't actually afford them. This attitute has brought about vanity amongst the women of present society.
Another example would be the younger generation wanting to be like and follow fashion and lifestyle trends of the rich and the famous. This comes at a cost to the parents as well as problems to the society.
Therefore, as much as international products being available locally, I believe it comes with it's fair share of negativity. Being brand conscious, vanity, extravagance and living above one's means are all the negative developments of having access to anything that money can buy.
In my opinion even though it is a good thing to have access to international brands locally, one should always know their limits and live within their means at all times.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.231003039514 0.247107183377 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.161094224924 0.155533422707 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.09726443769 0.0946595960268 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0547112462006 0.0501214627716 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0455927051672 0.0437548338989 104% => OK
Prepositions: 0.109422492401 0.122226691241 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0455927051672 0.0403226058552 113% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81637920248 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0334346504559 0.0326793684256 102% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0942249240122 0.0861772015684 109% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0182370820669 0.021408717616 85% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0121580547112 0.011925033212 102% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1800.0 1933.35771543 93% => OK
No of words: 299.0 316.048096192 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.02006688963 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.384615384615 0.374742101984 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.267558528428 0.28420135186 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.177257525084 0.203846283523 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0936454849498 0.137316102897 68% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81637920248 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.037074148 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605351170569 0.56093040696 108% => OK
Word variations: 67.5482208841 60.7387585426 111% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.6875 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6229692545 49.517814964 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 127.492653851 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5625 0.814263465372 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 45.4433528428 49.1944974215 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.47674418605 1.69124875643 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308199970861 0.332605444948 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0978779856528 0.102741220458 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0633726430452 0.0668466124924 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.559635736786 0.534860350844 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162391199034 0.148594505496 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106732230482 0.134430193775 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599626888673 0.0742795772207 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.162714004583 0.324371583561 50% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0256737570534 0.0638462369009 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156158554209 0.228012699653 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646097873136 0.058150111329 111% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41683366733 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 1.9629258517 306% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.