Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think is a positive or negative development?
In the last few decades, globalization has become much more popular because global brands have created strong advertising and transportation systems have improved. therefore, every product can be found easily in every country. However, even though it has good improvement, it causes some disadvantages. In this essay, I will explore the pros and cons of buying the same products and try to draw some conclusion.
The main positive improvement is that this situation can provide confidence to tourists while eating food. For example, most of them can hesitate to try eating local foods and prefer generally restaurants which are known very well such fast food restaurants. That's why they can feel more comfortable themselves and be happier.
Turning to the other side, one of the problems causes culture loss. In other words, each country has own culture and tradition and wants to protect some special features. For instance, Starbucks which is USA coffee company causes to lose local coffee culture in Turkey and many Turkish people prefer to drink it to Turkish coffee. Also, other fast food companies based on abroad change our eating habit rather than consuming Turkish cuisine.
Another drawback is that local business cannot compete with this global brand and have to close their stores. therefore, this situation affects the country economy and unemployment rate. Meanwhile, the number of tourists who is willing to experience new things tend to decrease their attractions because the same brands can occupy the local market. they can not prefer to visit these types of countries.
To sum up, buying the same products which are everywhere in the world have both advantage and disadvantages. some tourists prefer to buy the products that they already know. However, it causes to lose local culture and business. Personally, I believe that this situation has some disadvantages outweigh positives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3201320132 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66337247107 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587458745875 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0605830647 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8421052632 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9473684211 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135211650589 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383709536604 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433615855045 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741377219562 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435189303999 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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