Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Every country has own language. this feature can cause some difficulties for a person who moved to a foreign country. I completely agree with this statement because they have to deal with these circumstances. In this essay, I will discuss some social problems and try to draw some conclusions.
There is no doubt that immigrants face firstly the language barrier, which means that a person coming from other countries might not be able to speak and understand language. Since they do not know the speaking language, they may have difficulty making new friends who live in a foreign country. Therefore, they can feel alone themselves. Also, they can not communicate easily the other people when they need to buy something. For example, they can not ask to help from a market staff or they can not get medical drugs easily. As a result of, they undergo some social problems in society.
The other social problem is that there can be discrimination. In other words, local people cannot be accepted into their society. For example, a person who is foreigner applies many jobs to earn money but they can not be accepted because not only he or she does not know the language but also is immigrant. Thus, an individual might not survive if he or she is exposed to this behavior and has to come back to their country. However, if the government should enact new laws about anti-discrimination laws, it could be resolved this problem. ever, it can be resolved by companies, governments, institutions, and individuals by implementing serious policies, rules, and anti-discrimination laws
To sum up, the advantages of living in a country and speaking a new language are obviously more than disadvantages such as some possible social and practical problems. Personally, I believe that people should educate themselves before moving another country and government ought to prevent such these issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, no doubt, such as, as a result, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0607028754 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95592946653 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565495207668 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.9384739962 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1764705882 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41176470588 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181422914964 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565075634312 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502065200806 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113221184001 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375602199016 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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