Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement
To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
<p style="white-space: normal;">It is often argued that the government should enhance the laws about recycling in order to protect the environment while the others hold that increasing laws would not be enough to raise awareness for the green environment. I completely disagree with this point because the government needs to bring some recycling cognizance to people before laws.</p><p style="white-space: normal;">Some people simplistically claim that recycling is insufficient and just solve this problem to be enacted the new codes. In other words, if the government increased strict laws about it, citizens would be more careful. For example, when somebody does not be interested in recycling, he or she has to pay more taxes or to be fined by the government. However, there is little evidence to support this view that increasing laws can solve this problem totally when people do not make this willingly because they have to do because of laws. Indeed, they will not pay attention to protect the environment.</p><p style="white-space: normal;">On the other hand, there is a view that firstly government should increase awareness to maintain a green environment. The proponents of this view reasonably argue that some advertising which is related to the importance of recycling can be published for individuals. For instance, they can show our nature how can be demolished because of some harmful products for the environment and because of that many animals such as fish could die. Maybe after 10 years, there will not be any fish in the sea. Besides, the government ought to give some education to children and adults to keep clean and recycle their garbages. All of them can be more useful and permanent rather than putting new codes.</p><p style="white-space: normal;">To sum up, although some people assume that increasing laws is essential to raise more recycling, the other view fairly concludes that it is not a realistic and permanent solution and first people should really want it. Also, governments should support them with some advertising and educational activities. Personally, I believe that punishments cannot improve our awareness about recycling and we already have to know the results and want to protect our habitat.</p>
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, may, really, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, such as, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46892655367 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.65535849945 2.80592935109 130% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519774011299 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.7579479299 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.923076923 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2307692308 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9230769231 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231443521308 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858071090613 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049320456845 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231443521308 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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