Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
It is argued that the number of students who learn a second language can be taught in primary school rather than high school. I completely agree with this opinion because children's learning rate can be high level at an early age. In this essay, I will explore the pros and cons of learning the foreign language in primary school and try to draw some conclusions.
One of the main positive of learning other languages in primary school is that pupils can learn faster because their mind tends to open to catch new information. In other words, if they can be taught other language in a primary school, they can understand more and improve their foreign language compared to high school students. Another major advantage is that they can read a book or watch cartoons in a foreign language which means that they do not need any translation. Therefore, they can improve it easily and they choose to study in a foreign language high school for creating a good future.
Turning to the other side of the argument is that students can not concentrate on priority lessons in primary school such as mathematics,science, and history very well. That is to say, that language always needs to study more and more because if they do not be interested in it, they may forget it and need more effort. Another major drawback is that they may confuse lessons each other for learning everything new. For example, students take lessons about the rule of their own language and foreign language at the same time. As a result, all problems can cause to decrease their success and maybe they can get a low point from their lessons.
To sum up, although there are some advantages of learning a new language in early age such as speed learning and automatic translation in their mind, there are some drawbacks affect their school achievements such as concentration problem and confusion. Personally, I believe that when students should take new language lessons in primary school, it can be better and help their future career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, second, so, therefore, well, for example, such as, as a result, in other words, to sum up, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8347826087 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59340769935 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48115942029 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7759911876 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.142857143 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6428571429 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328396587293 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135733180125 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763342401904 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230604801933 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790193227963 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.