A country becomes more interesting and develops more quickly when its population includes a mixture of nationalities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The tendency of globalisation that takes place at a breakneck speed on the global scale seems to make countries with the diversity in nationalities and cultures no longer abnormal phenomenon. Furthermore, several people these days hold the belief that these nations will be a much more amusing place to live as well as its national development will also be boosted more rapidly. From my perspective, while the advantageous impacts of this type of nation are undeniable, it may also bring severe effects on the society as well
On the one hand, there is a variety of explanation to support the idea of culture-mixed countries. In terms of society, the variation in nationalities will irrefutably make a great contribution to turning these nations into a more exciting place. It does not seem unreasonable to suggest that people from distinct countries throughout the world carry a part of the ingenious cultures and traditions with them. Therefore, living in these countries may offer citizens an opportunity to accomplish various knowledge about other civilisations, especially their lifestyle and ethnic origins. Concerning the economic aspect, people with different background allegedly have their own strength and deficiency, thereby living and working collaboratively under the same flag is synonymous with maximised productivity as an outcome of an inflow of expertise, experience, investments as well as a dynamic labour force
Nevertheless, the mixture of nationalities may also detrimental to a nation due to various reasons. One fundamental hazard is the culture difference. It particularly significant that people from different segments of a cosmopolitan society may found it challenging to sympathize with others. Consequently, normal behaviours in one's culture may be misinterpreted as impolite or even exasperating and conflicts may happen many a time. By the way of exemplifying, asking for personal information without reason may be considered as unacceptable in the majority of western countries while in eastern counterparts, this is nothing more than a conventional greeting
In conclusion, while the merits of multi-cultural to the society of one's nation are undeniable, it may also have some drawback due to the culture gap.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53623188406 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3502105819 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576811594203 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.739263111 49.4020404114 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 173.636363636 106.682146367 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3636363636 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4545454545 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12961532177 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490112829978 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521132412538 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794421751155 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452880507087 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.09 50.2224549098 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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