A course law should be made mandatory in school to bring up law abiding citizens.

Essay topics:

A course law should be made mandatory in school to bring up law abiding citizens.

Although the school system focuses on bringing up responsible and productive citizens, however, in most shools nowadays, there is no lectures related to the laws of the country. As a result, many graduates from school do not have sufficient knowledge about the legal system and may make mistakes in the future. Hence, it is a recommendable suggestion that a sufficiently detailed course in law should be taught at different levels of school to decrease the negative aspects which might happen due to not knowing the law.

Votes
Average: 2.2 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 122, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are no lectures'?
Suggestion: there are no lectures
...zens, however, in most shools nowadays, there is no lectures related to the laws of the country. As ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 41.998997996 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 435.0 1615.20841683 27% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 86.0 315.596192385 27% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05813953488 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.04526164648 4.20363070211 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84218492419 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 67.0 176.041082164 38% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.779069767442 0.561755894193 139% => OK
syllable_count: 135.0 506.74238477 27% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.584102893 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.0 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331738861937 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185517194194 0.084324248473 220% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10741716787 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.331738861937 0.151304729494 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 78.4519038076 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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