Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas( in words, picutres, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is true that free atmosphere can nurture great ideas and innovations. Human historical records show that only those who live in a free and equal society gain a lot of achievements.
The reason for this phenomenon may involve the recognition that creativity is an advanced intelligent activity based on some factors such as good health, broader horizons and pleased mind among others. people find it difficult to create a gorgeous article without enough food. It is even impossible for a painter who is good at oil paints to oblidge him to complete a traditional Chinese painting. From this point of view, the government should not impose its administrative thoughts on artists, especially in terms of forms of expressing their own ideas. Without these restritions mentioned above, people with real talent in all walks life have created many splendid productions
However, reaching the conclusion that free expression is essential is not the same as assuming that the government can completely ignore this respect. Without authority’s supervision, I think that ordinary people’s interests are more likely to be damaged. Many painters maybe tend to do some graffitos on their neighbours’ walls. Although these patterns are awesome for these painters, instead, the owner of walls may still get annoyed about it. The government to some extent need to take measures avoid this happen such as by fining those artists whose behavioursof expressing their own ideas have already disturbed the general public.
My view is that creative artists should be encouraged to express their opions and one of top priority to the government is to protect this kind of liberty. But this does not mean that artists can be allowed to do whatever they want, or to do as they please. It is misinformation or misbehaviour that should be limited.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...horizons and pleased mind among others. people find it difficult to create a gorgeous ...
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Line 5, column 637, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ir own ideas have already disturbed the general public. My view is that creative artists sh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, i think, kind of, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22558922559 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95051333064 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639730639731 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2659280141 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.857142857 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254869511176 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815520427782 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843402425354 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150015990266 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129823208997 0.056905535591 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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