The university has provided student who are going to enter university with two summer vocation grograms. Which one do you think is better for students?
1) take some college courses in advance. e.g. some courses that are related to students' major.
2) visit some history museums or historical relics.
The freshmen of the university have been provided two summer vocation program, one is taking some college courses in advance, another is visiting some history museums or historical relics. Both of the two choices would be beneficial to students. Personally speaking, I will choose to take some related courses in advance.
First and foremost, as the students just participated the university entrance exams, the learning status is in the peak, It will be effective if they learn some major related courses. Some students summer vocation are not well organized, they may waste a lot of time in playing computer games or they may just lounge around doing nothing. In addtion, It is meaningful to take college courses in advance. Students can get a glance at the knowlege they need to learn in the near futher. By this mean, they can prepare them to adapt to university study as soon as possible. Therefore, when the new semester begins, they will have much confident rather than being at a loss.
Secondly, students can know whether they are suitable to the majors they choose, whether they like the university and its atmosphere or not in advance. If they have no interest in their majors, they can take some measures before the formal study, such as changing the major and so forth. By taking courses, students and teachers can know each other, students can also familiar with their calssmates. Thus, friendship is easily established. I know a girl, named Nancy, is a perfect example. She applied a university in a big city, which she had never been there before. When she first entered the doorstep of the university, she cannot adapt with food and atmosphere there. She was full of regret to apply that university.
Admittedly, visit some history museums or historical relics can also broden our horizon. Just as a Chinese saying goes, "he who know little about his past will never have a bright future." We can aquire more impressive knowledge. It does have instructive meanings.
Taking into accout the preparations students should make in advance, along with the circumstance students are supposed to be familiar with ahead of schedule, It is strongly recommand that college courses are taked in advance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'program' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'programs'.
Suggestion: programs
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ther than being at a loss. Secondly, students can know whether they are suita...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05420054201 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6308515422 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550135501355 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.457303662 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8095238095 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52380952381 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381530084734 0.236089414692 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100283173869 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977474237757 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219244931251 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977892535416 0.0645574589148 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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