Do you agree or disagree: Internet should be like other services, such as roads, and government should provide it to the public with no cost.
People have benefit tremendously from the advancement of technology, especially from internet. Internet has gradually became a necessity for modern citizen's daily life. Recently, a hotly-discussed proposal has been brought to attention regarding whether the government should provide free internet to the public. If I were the decision maker, I would definitely support it.
At present, no matter where we go, we are blessed with the prevalent use of internet. For example, if we take a trip by ourselves, we need to make a lot of preparations which include the routies , the transportation, the special food in local area, the customs and so forth . The office staff uses internet to work. People uses internet to have some entertainment items or search for all kinds of resources. All of these can not be known if we have no access to internet. People almost can not live without internet, just like people can not live without roads or some other infrastructure. Therefore, it is imperative for the government to take some measures to make internet available for everyone.
Secondly, the high charge has excluded many people out of internet use. The internet cables are needed to be prepared, which is costy. The signal receptors are also very expensive, the service fee are also needed to be paid every months. There is a large majority of people who live in poverty-stricken area , and they also deserve equal opportunity to use inernet. People in these area can make good use of the internet to get educated or change the poor condition of their hometown . Besides, students with no income also need internet to make research or do paper work. Thus, it is the escapable responsiblity of the government to render assistance to this groups who has no money but longing for the use of internet.
Taking into account of the need of ordinary people, along with the expensive fees of the internet, the financial support from the government is of essential significance. More budgets should be put into internet infrastructure and be given to poor people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...resources. All of these can not be known if we have no access to internet. People...
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...nge the poor condition of their hometown . Besides, students with no income also n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02923976608 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93195236701 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549707602339 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1854357053 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.5376344086 542% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221455555991 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070023849159 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561817369526 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142295458211 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218995805971 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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