Do you agree or disagree: Internet should be like other services, such as roads, and government should provide it to the public with no cost.

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Do you agree or disagree: Internet should be like other services, such as roads, and government should provide it to the public with no cost.

It is inevitable that everybody uses the internet every day and even every time. Therefore, this raises the question that should government offer the internet to the public with no cost. I take the position that the internet is the public good and definitely should be provided by the government

First, the government needs to provide the internet to the public without cost because it can benefit most people and particularly the people in disadvantaged families. To elaborate, the internet can help citizens connect with the whole world and gain the newest information. If our government can provide the internet for free, it not only can stimulate the people to learn new knowledge but also can shorten the gap of educational resource between the rich and poor. Take my friend Jimmy for example. He lived in the remote place and his family cannot support him to get the degree in the university. However, without entering the university, he used the online class resources offered by the university to self-study. Furthermore, he read the international news every day through the internet to prevent himself not disjointing with the society. By years and years of learning, he becomes a famous investor in Taiwan and told me that if he did not have the internet at that time, he might be a normal peasant for his whole life.

Furthermore, the government should provide the internet to every people with no cost because it only the government can conduct it. It is conceivable that the big cooperation will charge high to make the profit. Thus, if the government does not offer the internet for free, the citizens need to pay a lot to enjoy this convenience technology. Take my hometown Taiwan for example. In the past ten years, our government did not provide the internet because it did not consider the internet was a public good. Due to this, many companies started to offer the internet service and charge high to earn plentiful profits. Finally, our government realized that if it did not implement some policy about the internet, those companies would violent citizens right of using the internet someday.

Some people may argue that people who want to use the internet should pay by themselves because the government has it budget limit. However, I insist that the reason why government exists is that it will provide some public good that citizens all needed. And the internet is one of it. I understand that the government has it budget limit, so it can provide the basic internet to the citizens. Nevertheless, if the people who pursuing high-quality internet, then they should pay the money themselves.

In conclusion, I hold the belief that the government should provide the internet to the public with no cost because it not only can benefit most people, but also the government can conduct it. Even if the government does not have enough money to complete this policy, it at least needs to provide the basic internet to the citizens.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'budgets'?
Suggestion: budgets
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Line 7, column 327, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'budgets'?
Suggestion: budgets
...I understand that the government has it budget limit, so it can provide the basic inte...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, at least, for example, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2466.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 500.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.932 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72870804502 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6708021267 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.422 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 779.4 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1213752956 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.75 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305224349547 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100648334326 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101516060455 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233284613746 0.150856017488 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824261209238 0.0645574589148 128% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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