The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advanced technology which can prevent and solve a crime.Do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, the development of technology has been positively changing the way people live and behave. From my personal perspective, one of the benefits of technology advancement is that it helps to reduce the crime rate in society by providing preventive measures and facilitating investigation processes.
To begin with, modern technology has an essential role to play in avoiding unlawful behaviors. Firstly, advanced safety measures such as digital keys, unbreakable windows or alarm systems give houses and building a high level of insulation from being broken in. Secondly, it is common to see scanning and ultrasound devices in airports or train stations nowadays. Under the close inspection and scrutiny of these machines, trafficking or carrying illegal objects are nearly impossible. Finally, cameras and CCTV are increasingly being used in public spaces and indoor as well. These devices offer round the clock surveillance as perfect supplements to police’s patrols. They serve as a deterrent to the prospective transgressors knowing that their actions are being watched 24/24.
Not only deter crimes from happening, technologies also efficiently support police in investigating and detecting wrong-doing actions. Besides the aforementioned advantage of CCTV, it is also a powerful tool to inspect upon crimes. To make it clear, by extracting videos from camera systems, police could easily investigate cases and track the whereabouts of the suspects. Likewise, science of footprint and biometric data systems enable the police to identify criminals. For example, the US police recently announced that they had successfully developed a new technology that allowed them to recreate portraits of a person just by a drop of blood, which was expected to help tracing criminals in the future.
In conclusion, the usefulness of technology in mitigating crimes is undeniable due to the arguments presented above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, firstly, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60544217687 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10064564639 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673469387755 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7415327409 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.866666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148406522392 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418656224008 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063057644043 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108216884272 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060940013021 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.65 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.