People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
It is true that beside the convenience that living in big cities might bring, residents in these cities are confronted with many issue ranging from costly living expenses to intense competition for jobs. To remedy these issues, steps need to be taken by the government to spur people to live in less crowded areas.
To begin with, one problem that most urban inhabitants have to endure is the expensive costs of living. In general, in populated urban areas, an average household has to spend a considerable proportion of its disposable income on accommodation and utilities due to the lack of living spaces in these areas. Moreover, spiraling daily expenses such as food and education also put a burden on urban citizens. As a result, a number of people who cannot afford the prices and have to live frugally in large cities often find their lives unhappy and uncomfortable. Another issue of urban life is the severe competition of the job market. The fact that people from outlying areas come to big cities looking for opportunities leads to a redundant in labour supply while the demand is not increase at the same pace. Consequently, unemployment is rife while those who are working have vie to keep their jobs.
There are several measures that the government could take to entice people away from teeming metropolises. Firstly, the authorities should institute special preferences such as tax reductions or discounts in public school fees for those who choose to live in small towns. Secondly, proper amount of money from national budgets should be invested in upgrading the infrastructure and services in small towns so as to make the life there more satisfying. All these measures would act as incentives to stimulate the trend towards living outside big cities.
In conclusion, residents in large cities might have some adversity like pecuniary difficulties or harsh competition for jobs and the government should consider undertaking some measures mentioned above to tackle the problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, as to, in conclusion, in general, such as, as a result, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15644171779 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79284834567 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59509202454 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9802786867 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.071428571 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8571428571 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255728821685 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763543228419 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493444544867 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143459473739 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410681342779 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.