A crime related news are detailed covered in newspaper and telivision. Some people say that there should be government interception. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this present era, there is electronic media and print media which provides the exclusive news to the public. So therefore, a group of people considered that authorities should check the every types of news and other contradicts this view by saying that government should give the liberty to the media. So this essay shall analyse both the above mention aspects along with my opinion in the upcoming paragraph.
According to the first school of thoughts, there are various points which describes that government should holdover the media. Firstly, media telecast the news on television for the public sometimes these news are exaggreted by the media to just gain the popularity so these types of news are far away from the reality. Not only this, there are some secrets of the countries are also openly telecast on the television as well as by the newspapers which is highly affect the incognito secrets of the nations. Further, criminals are learning the many ways to commit the clueless crime by these news and they become alert about it.
According to the second school of thoughts, media is the essential part of the society because it helps the public by providing the news so people get to know about each and everything about their local area as well global news. Furthermore, with the help of the media victims get the support of the public so government has to take a harsh action against the criminal, so this action can control the criminal activities among the society.
In my opinion, media is the best way to get a news but it is the prime responsibility of the any type of media to give the factual news but the government interception is also mandatory to control the any fake news.
Overall, after a lots of thoughts and deliberation it is true to say that government should take some harsh action against the counterfeit news and media should have to telecast only the real news among the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: there are electronic media
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...here is electronic media and print media which provides the exclusive news to the...
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Suggestion: So; Therefore
...vides the exclusive news to the public. So therefore, a group of people considered that auth...
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Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
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... on television for the public sometimes these news are exaggreted by the media to just gai...
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...ll as by the newspapers which is highly affect the incognito secrets of the nations. F...
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Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
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...ny ways to commit the clueless crime by these news and they become alert about it. Acco...
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...verything about their local area as well global news. Furthermore, with the help ...
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...ol the any fake news. Overall, after a lots of thoughts and deliberation it is true...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, second, so, therefore, well, as to, as well as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81325301205 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52319045191 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481927710843 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.7677200707 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.272727273 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1818181818 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165394376695 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725028006862 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517526537536 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109009618335 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387061639122 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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