Crimes and other kinds of information on television and newspaper have adverse consequences. This kind of information to be restricted to be shown in media. To what extend do you agree or disagree.
Following the development of civilization, information is easily accessible to every single person, however, not all kinds of new are beneficial and helpful. Since there is a great number of sensitive contents that can be found on television as well as newspaper, it raises a question whether they generate adverse consequences to inappropriate viewers. Further in this essay, the harmfulness along with the benefits it could bring to the society will be mentioned and discussed more.
First and foremost, it is obvious that social media platforms can have a considerable influence on the community, therefore, television and newspaper are great means to transfer knowledge to people. For that reason, crimes and other types of information could act as a way to warn bad individuals or organization and force them to end their illegal actions immediately. Moreover, children and even adults are educated about the laws from such news, these pieces of propaganda also remind them not to repeat law-breaking activities.
Nevertheless, unexpected effects could be resulted when people who have unstable minds like kids come through one of these violent information. As a matter of fact, unhealthy examples on television could cause youngster to imitate without caution since they could be quite interesting and trigger the curiosity within the undeveloped psychology of teenagers. In addition, not only can these news lower the value of a person unwantedly but it could also turn into a reminder and bring nightmares to those who have suffered from similar traumas accidently. Undoubtedly, unimaginable consequences can be found when certain types of new are being seen by the wrong viewers.
In conclusion, criminal demonstrations and other sensitive information ought to be banned on television and social media platforms due to the negative impacts it could affect to many a person.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Further,
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Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06039935959 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623728813559 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.4047082044 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.818181818 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8181818182 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9090909091 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249305669677 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08606486167 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472466505981 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1479742058 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363769312998 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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