Cycling is more environmental friendly than others forms of transport why is not popular in many places how to increase popularity
There are number of factors which explains why bicycle is not eminent in many places while ,it's more beneficial for environmental and health benefits .however,this issue can be resolved by adopting a number of solutions as will now be discuss.
There are probably number of factors involved but the chief cause might be that in golden era people are more educated and earning much wages because of that they want to sedentary lifestyle with luxurious vehicles which are more comfortable with also highlight public status in society .besides,they think bicycle is more poor ride and time consuming transportation.otherwise,21st century transport more advance such as car,motorbike,train,aeroplane and so on which more faster and safe time so that individual most like to travel by automobiles vehicles in busy life.as well as this,a subsequent factors could be because nowadays visitors more like to travel historical destination and long distance journey by car and motorbike without any trouble or stress . They think if travel ride to cycle then they spend completely one life than never finish the journey since bicycle is more slower and unsafe.for instance during bad weather ,late night travel and rainy day times ride to cycle more dangerous in road and recount trapped in traffic congestion.
In my view,there are number of actions that could be taken and when dealing with the first problems ,the easiest way to work it out would be to governments to campaign cycle seminars free coast and encourage to individual there are more people participate and efforts to win and finish race with which majority of individual excited with also use the bicycle in daily routine life.futhermore,ride to cycle more beneficial for health there by, in body more improve skills and muscle with ride to cycle in daily routine individual also feel active,sharpminded ,fit and fine .taking on second factor,the most successful way to confront this would be authorities to make some strictly law with forced to ride cycle with otherwise,automobiles vehicles,oil,gas should be done more expensive with which individual be compelled to buy cycle with also use cycle short distance journey.
On balance,although,cycle is best form of transport rather than car ,motorbike and so on vehicles expand more pollution with generate diseases but there are number of benefits ride cycle such as protect the environment,safe the natural substance and health beneficial
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, second, so, then, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2067.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35492227979 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.48401297167 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546632124352 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 666.9 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 77.0 20.2975951904 379% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 273.237918306 49.4020404114 553% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 413.4 106.682146367 388% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 77.2 20.7667163134 372% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.2 7.06120827912 329% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165932889921 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110684970563 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374885008267 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12153831058 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363669307349 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.4 13.0946893788 324% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -15.14 50.2224549098 -30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.5 11.3001002004 305% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.93 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.26 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.8 10.1190380762 324% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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