The dangers and complexities of the modern world made the mobile phone an absolute necessity for children.To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
It is a fact that,complexities and dangers of the modern world insisting humans to hold mobile phones always with them. Nowadays it is a must not only for adults but also for children. This essay illustrates about the positive and negative impacts of handling mobile phones with children and explains whether it is important to them or not.
At first,mobiles are very necessary and its proper usage will help us to get a right way if we are in danger especially for children.For example, in this fearful world there are lots of people trying to hack children especially school children for different unethical purposes.If they have a mobile phone and knowing that they are in trap,they can contact their parents or friends soon. In this new era, there are different types of mobile phones available in the market.We can download a variety of applications in cell phones such as dictionary,study materials,whats up,radios and the like.Such type of applications help them to go their life much easier and comfortable than previous.
On the other hand,there are too many illegal or unnecessary sites also available in mobiles and with the help of internet facility such type of applications children can use wrong way.Children are exactly like small trees.If we treat them with perfect sand and water,it will grow fast. If we are trying to avoid them,they will not grow the way we expect and may lost their life too.So we must teach them about mobiles correct usage and explain them why parents immense them to hold it even they know the negative impacts.
To conclude,mobile phones are one of the highest part of technology and it is a very useful equipment if you use it properly or in a correct way.As far as iam concern, i strongly agree with the statement that, the dangers and complexities of the modern world are made the cell phones an absolute necessity for children. Parents must guide them its proper usage and explain the purpose of giving it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89156626506 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82026164459 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527108433735 0.561755894193 94% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => OK
Sentence length SD: 109.191755669 49.4020404114 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 180.444444444 106.682146367 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.8888888889 20.7667163134 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278622328534 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130110960855 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11644390069 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197546711412 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102566323795 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.