Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. To what extent do you agree?
In this new era, almost all people are interested to visit other countries for different purposes like tourists, businesses, educational purposes and so on. Some of them are believe that, foreigners must adopt the local customs and whereas others argue that host countries must welcome their cultural differences.
First and foremost, each nations have their own customs and behavior since past decades. For example, Gulf countries are always giving priority for hiding their women's face with a face cover. They are not allowing to show their women's face to any one except her own family members. This is one of their customs especially in rural areas and also they are insisting those who are coming to their country as a visitor for any purposes must follow the same custom. Otherwise they will punish them even if you are a foreigner too.
On the other hand, some people think that, we must accept others cultural values also. For instance, some developing countries like India is accepting almost all different cultures of people. which will help them to understand the culture and behavior of others and can be treat them their own way. Moreover accepting of people from other nations will increase the financial income of the host country.
To put in a nut shell, welcoming and treating foreigners will helps to increase the country"s income and also to help local people to get a good chance to learn a new language and a cultural status. So in my point of view, host countries must accept the cultural differences and should treat them as they wish and never insist them to follow our natural habits unless they like. Which will automatically inhibits the flow and they may move to more freedom places because each person in this world likes to live as a free bird.
Comments
i cannot understand about the
i cannot understand about the white space you mentioned above. please explain to me
In English, you don't need to
In English, you don't need to put spaces at the beginning of a paragraph, like:
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but:
In this new era,
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...st welcome their cultural differences. First and foremost, each nations have th...
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Suggestion: showing
...ith a face cover. They are not allowing to show their womens face to any one except her...
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Suggestion: Otherwise,
...y purposes must follow the same custom. Otherwise they will punish them even if you are a...
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... them even if you are a foreigner too. On the other hand, some people think tha...
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...rs and can be treat them their own way. Moreover accepting of people from other nations ...
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... financial income of the host country. To put in a nut shell, welcoming and tre...
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... welcoming and treating foreigners will helps to increase the country's income a...
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...is world likes to live as a free bird.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, moreover, so, whereas, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88778877888 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41295883841 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544554455446 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4330046889 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.785714286 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30849651707 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106591169631 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829324643699 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197876479216 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772274359355 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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