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There are many different type of music in the world today. why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

Essay topics: There are many different type of music in the world today. why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

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There are different kinds of music we can listen today around the globe such as traditional musics, pop songs, cinema songs and the like. Almost all age groups are interested to listen a variety of musics today and they have their own reason for that as well. International music has a variety of spirit and lots of people are interested to listen such type of music, which gradually reduces the importance of traditional songs.
We cannot avoid music from our daily life because it has some special power to manage our tensions and worries. Listening to music is one of the best way for relaxation. For instance, some hospitals are playing musics in their wards because it has some power to heel some psychological conditions and moreover helps the patients to get a refresh environment. Furthermore, music has some peculiar tunes which force us to recollect our vivid memory from the subconscious mind.
On the other hand, nowadays most of them are interested to listen international musics than traditional songs. Today traditional music has recording in some special occasions only. For example, National Song is playing only on National Day or Republic Day. There is a story behind each traditional songs and we are using some special tunes for singing whereas, international songs can be play anywhere at any time. Moreover, which is easy to sing and learn as well.
To conclude, people are selecting music due to their own interest. Even though traditional songs are important, today's world gives popularity for international songs because that is more convenient. However music is playing everywhere and each of them are listening for different purposes.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 336, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... and moreover helps the patients to get a refresh environment. Furthermore, music has som...
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Line 4, column 199, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... songs because that is more convenient. However music is playing everywhere and each of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10256410256 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75642911899 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534798534799 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5161147638 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36879551518 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143543744718 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896377376298 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244926388741 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607901095536 0.056905535591 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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