The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit.
What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?
Smoking is the very bad habit and dangerous too. Many people are suffering from cancer every year its ratio is becoming high. Once a person gets used to smoking, it is hard to curtail smoking for him. Although he knows it is very dangerous for health even then he keeps on smoking on daily basis and after all one day he passes away.
I strongly believe that if anyone is smoking on daily basis, he doesn’t know but being closed to die. One day the person needs to consult the doctor and doctors always say that don’t smoke but the person doesn’t obey the doctor and after that he dies. Nothing could happen until the person wants to stop smoking.
I tend to think that A doctor can only suggest to patient to stop smoking but it depends on the person either he leaves smoking or not. Every doctor knows, leave smoking is not only hard but impossible. Because the person addicted to smoke and then he never stops even anyone tries to make the person understand.
It seems to me, smoking brings the person to illness e.g. lungs cancer, heart disease, diabetes, liver cancer, ectopic pregnancy (in women), vision loss, tuberculosis, rheumatoid arthritis, colorectal cancer, loss of years of life and many else like these diseases.
On the other hands, Government can make it reduce in our society to make this prohibited. To reduce this activity, Government will have to ban on each locations from where the cigarettes are sold otherwise nobody can make it stop.
To Conclude the topic, Smoking is the very bad habit and dangerous too. Many people are suffering from cancer every year its ratio is becoming high. If anyone is smoking on daily basis, he doesn’t know but being closed to die. One day the person needs to consult the doctor. Smoking brings the person to illness e.g. lungs cancer, heart disease, diabetes, liver cancer. Government can make it reduce in our society to make this prohibited.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, e.g., if, so, then, after all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81081081081 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36231188762 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462462462462 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.4150828747 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3157894737 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5263157895 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78947368421 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235236195896 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875890924076 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582458202062 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133317499627 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642190765636 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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