Some countries encourage teenagers to have part-time job and see it as a good thing, while others disagree. Give your opinion and explain both views.
Teenagers are liked in each countries because they are capitals of whole country. They are fuel providers to the country. They are energetic, hard worker, broad mind, supporter and inventor. They can do whatever they want because of having ability in teen age.
I strongly believe that its beneficial for teenagers to have part-time job to earn more even with their monthly income, which is only fixed by month. I mean to say that not everyone gets part-time job, sometimes part-time job takes time and becomes more difficult to get.
I tend to think that the people disagree to have part-time job because of already working in the official environment. To make it clear, If anyone is working in a circle of Graphic Designing so probably he wouldn’t want to have part-time job because of already doing the same faculty job.
It seems to me, some countries encourage teenagers to have part-time job and see it as a good thing maybe because of looking their energetic people in that country. On the other hand, not in every country people are active and energetic. It basically depends on their diet and daily routine, they keep on doing hard work since childhood so they are used to their environment and daily routine of work.
To summarize the topic, It's beneficial for teenagers to have part-time job to earn more even with their monthly income, which is only fixed by month. The people disagree to have part-time job because of already working in the official environment. Some countries encourage teenagers to have part-time job and see it as a good thing maybe because of looking their energetic people in that country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: jobbed
...t the people disagree to have part-time job because of already working in the offic...
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...he wouldn't want to have part-time job because of already doing the same facul...
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...s encourage teenagers to have part-time job and see it as a good thing maybe becaus...
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...eficial for teenagers to have part-time job to earn more even with their monthly in...
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...s encourage teenagers to have part-time job and see it as a good thing maybe becaus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, i mean, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90647482014 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55842147001 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44964028777 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3098386783 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4285714286 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315841479634 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134429473404 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122491463437 0.0667982634062 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197402991882 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0948057372439 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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