Demand of food

Essay topics:

Demand of food

Whether limited agricultural land can catch the rasing food consumption or not, becoming a topic of grave concern. There are various reasons of this emerging food consumption. However, international communities have to take necessary step to combat with this issue. The upcoming paragraph will further explain causes and remedial solutions in a more specified way.

The factors attributing to this issue are enormous. In the first place, the rapid population growth is main cause of incline in food consumption. According to the senses of 2011, world population is 6.9 billion, which is growing at about 3 percentage rate and going to cross the mark of 9 billion by 2030. Besides, it may added that eating habits of societies are changing. Societies are adapting the consumerism culture, that leads to a food wastage. As an illustration, recently a report was published by WHO, in which organisation mention that near about 1/3 of world,s produced food was wasted.

Though the situation raise a red flag, the dismal picture can be corrected if taken a multi-pronged to it. The very first one is nations have to join hands and coöperate with each other, to raise crop production and low the cro waste. Developed nations should share their knowledge and technology with developing countries to develop farming and food processing sectors. Apart from that, scientist can develope hybrid crops and plants to tackle the problem of climate change.

At last, it can be summed up that no doubt increasing food demand is the topic of grave concern, but it is logical to assume that the issue can be effectively counted by adopting measures that have been mentioned above.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, may, so, apart from, no doubt, in the first place

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12773722628 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77366740245 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653284671533 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9419704936 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231105340949 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636114569222 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072147468198 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12332882936 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498386791528 0.056905535591 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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