Describe a custom from your country that you would like people from other countries to adopt.
Explain your choice, using specific reasons and examples.
Over the past decades, globalisation has translated into a chance for learning customs from the cultural diversity. Alongside the changing pattern around the globe, the altitude - practices make perfect - is a custom from China that worth advocating. This essay will explain the reasons using the examples from IELTS and the Hong Kong Physical Exercise Committee to demonstrate points.
To begin with, practice is intuitively perceived as a stimulus for success. The central reason behind this is twofold, firstly, rehearsal is likely to control risks. Secondly, one can leverage one's ability by translating a perception into an instinct through repetition. In fact, the majority of IELTS candidates admitted that employing English in daily life, to a considerable extent, ensure a merit in their speaking test. Consistent with this line of thinking is that junior learners who speak with a native teacher frequently in a small class often excel at language acquisition. Therefore, it is conclusively clear that constant practices increase the likelihood of managing certain disciplines.
Although there is a case for substantiating practice as a key of success, the impact of prolonged practices cannot be overstated, in particular the ensuing physical strain. For instance, recent empirical research from the Hong Kong Physical Exercise Committee ascertained that a significant number of athletes got hurt in their intensive trainings. It should not be forgotten that although some athletes can withstand these high-pressure practices without muscle injuries, there is invariably one winner in championship. Thus, most participants might not be able to reap their benefits as a winner.
In conclusion, although practice does not equate to win, it lays the groundwork for us to progress in most realms. Given the keen competition in globalisation, the custom of immersing oneself in practice offers people an opportunity to strive for their dreams. It is predicted that practices will grow in importance in most academic domains in the foreseeable future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in particular, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57324840764 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06831500372 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630573248408 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0038449838 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.375 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8125 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0923068708807 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0303707930271 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437778241478 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0632569374748 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678421284692 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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