Describe a custom from your country that you would like people from other countries to adopt.
Explain your choice, using specific reasons and examples.
Over the past decades, globalisation has translated into a chance for incorporating customs from the cultural diversity. Alongside this change around the globe, the altitude - practice makes perfect - is a custom from China that is worth advocating. This essay will explain the reasons using the examples from Hong Kong to demonstrate points.
To begin with, practice is intuitively perceived as a stimulus of success. The central reason behind this is twofold, firstly, rehearsal is likely to control risks. Secondly, one can leverage one's ability by translating an acquired skill into an instinct through repetition. In fact, the majority of IELTS candidates admitted that employing English in daily life, to a considerable extent, ensure a merit in their speaking tests. Consistent with this line of thinking is that junior learners who speak with a native teacher frequently would excel at language acquisition. Therefore, it is conclusively clear that constant practices increase the likelihood of managing certain disciplines.
Although there is a case for substantiating practice as a key of success, the impact of prolonged practices cannot be overstated, in particular the underlying physical strain. For instance, there was evidently an increase in incidence of injuries during intensive training over the past years. Moreover, it should not be forgotten that although some athletes can withstand these high-pressure practices, there is invariably one winner in championship. Thus, it is possible to state beyond doubt that work-life balance has a vitally important role to play during one's practice.
In conclusion, although practice does not equate to win, it lays the groundwork for us to make progress in most realms. Given the keen competition in globalisation, the custom of immersing oneself in practice offers people an opportunity to strive for their dreams. In all probability, practice will grow in importance in most academic domains in the foreseeable future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ntrol risks. Secondly, one can leverage ones ability by translating an acquired skil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in particular, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56765676568 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07407430193 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650165016502 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.0276295502 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.4375 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0921455052344 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304924759749 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480615765689 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.061461471209 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723996981132 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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