Despite the increased access to education, a significant number of people cannot read or write. What are the disadvantages and what action should the government take?
In this development society and conditions of study increase. However, some people still can’t writing and reading. This essay will examine disadvantages and what should government can take.
Admittedly, there are some arguments in favor of have many educational opportunities among young adolescents regardless of their background. However, have some people can’t write and read. First, this financial development tends not only to increase the overall college enrollment rate but also to state needs more money to provide for other problems. In this modern life, have many school and universities but that doesn’t mean everyone can go to school . Moreover, tuition fees increase, universities for the rich people. Example, in Vietnam have many big universities for students and have high level of education but have tuition fees increased significantly to 20 million for a semester, it have four semesters so have tuition fees more than 100 million for one academic year. Second, have many people can’t write and read would probably result in a greater supply of lowest qualified workers, which not benefits society in the long run. In fact, it is acknowledged that skilled and knowledgeable human capital is imperative to foster economic growth and technological in any nations.
Nevertheless, some feasible solutions to the issue should be considered. First, by imposing higher taxes on the upper-class, the government would receive a substantial tax revenue not only to improve public infrastructure and education but also to assist the less fortune. This would give those young people students, who live under the poverty line, equally good education opportunities through scholarships and philanthropic activities in remote areas. Especially, this financial support can mitigate their feeling of inferiority, which eventually promotes an egalitarian society. Second, government needs take care about everyone in any nations but not only about people have more fortune. Everyone all needs to study, they are one of the important part for society, Gianni imposition of government is the bigger burden for people go to school. Government need to have a financially viable option.
I were discussed about the disadvantages and solutions for this problem. In my opinion, if government provide this problem, that needs to know more about people’s background check and gives the tuition fees viable option.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[4]
Message: The verb 'can't' requires base form of this verb: 'write'
Suggestion: write
...rease. However, some people still can’t writing and reading. This essay will examine di...
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Line 2, column 378, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun school seems to be countable; consider using: 'many schools'.
Suggestion: many schools
...her problems. In this modern life, have many school and universities but that doesn’t mean ...
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Line 2, column 454, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t doesn’t mean everyone can go to school . Moreover, tuition fees increase, univer...
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Line 2, column 696, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...cantly to 20 million for a semester, it have four semesters so have tuition fees mor...
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Line 2, column 870, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the lowest'.
Suggestion: of the lowest
...uld probably result in a greater supply of lowest qualified workers, which not benefits s...
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Line 4, column 3, Rule ID: PERS_PRONOUN_AGREEMENT_SENT_START[3]
Message: Did you mean 'was'?
Suggestion: was
...to have a financially viable option. I were discussed about the disadvantages and s...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, still, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2051.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54324324324 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94181360057 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0206212033 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.55 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175362990924 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583375522566 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646735477728 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122349754168 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606226799051 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[4]
Message: The verb 'can't' requires base form of this verb: 'write'
Suggestion: write
...rease. However, some people still can’t writing and reading. This essay will examine di...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 378, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun school seems to be countable; consider using: 'many schools'.
Suggestion: many schools
...her problems. In this modern life, have many school and universities but that doesn’t mean ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 454, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t doesn’t mean everyone can go to school . Moreover, tuition fees increase, univer...
^^
Line 2, column 696, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...cantly to 20 million for a semester, it have four semesters so have tuition fees mor...
^^^^
Line 2, column 870, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the lowest'.
Suggestion: of the lowest
...uld probably result in a greater supply of lowest qualified workers, which not benefits s...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 3, Rule ID: PERS_PRONOUN_AGREEMENT_SENT_START[3]
Message: Did you mean 'was'?
Suggestion: was
...to have a financially viable option. I were discussed about the disadvantages and s...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, still, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2051.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54324324324 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94181360057 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0206212033 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.55 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175362990924 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583375522566 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646735477728 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122349754168 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606226799051 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.