In the developed world, average life expectancy in increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations
There is no denying that there is a significant rise in the number of the elderly in the world, especially in industrialized countries. Unluckily, it exerts many negative effects on society as a whole. This essay will analyze these consequences and recommend some practical methods to handle this phenomenon.
It can be said that there are various impacts of the aging population. One of the anticipated effects is that this leads to the rise in the number of dependent people. In other words, more people are not of working age and, otherwise, fewer residents managing to participate in the labor market. The state of the shrinking workforce may be a significant factor influencing negatively on the national economy. Another adverse impact is that the elderly population may impose a financial burden on the social welfare fund. This is due to the fact that people at the advanced age would claim pension benefits while paying a lower tax. When the number of the elderly increase, the government must raise the tax to balance the welfare spending. Needless to say, adults who are at the working age would pay more money to shoulder this tax burden.
However, there are some effective ways that we could carry out to tackle the adverse effects mentioned above. Firstly, the authority should follow policies aimed at raising the retirement age, perhaps from 65 to 70. Take the country of Japan as an example. In this country, the elderly, if their health condition remains to be good, can continue working in certain jobs such as taxi driver, security guard or even manager. Another solution could be adopted is encouraging immigration from other countries, especially places having the young population like China, Vietnam or Brazil. To be more precise, this extra number of foreign workers will expand the workforce. As a result, domestic companies would be provided with a better human resource; therefore, they are more likely to grow faster. In general, this is a considerable force for the development of the national economy.
In conclusion, it can be said that the aging population brings many negative influences. Nevertheless, if these solutions mentioned above are implemented, this situation will be mitigated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in general, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14325068871 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78085767527 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573002754821 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.350095082 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.9047619048 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220430541019 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611548741615 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399534496472 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136979533371 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175933766434 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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