In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problem will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing population.
It is true that, as a result of the high standard of life, people are living longer, especially in the industrialized nations. Even though, this trend can be attributed to many problems for both the individuals and the nation, proper and effective management can decrease the problems that the older population faces today.
The first and foremost problem related to increase in average life expectancy is the financial burden. If a government has a larger number of retired people than able-bodied workers, they will receive only less revenue as tax. Also, the government has to pay a huge amount of money as pension funds to the senior citizens. Consequently, the government of such nations will go through some financial crisis. Furthermore, the longevity can also result in various health related hazards. As age increases, people are more vulnerable to certain geriatric ailments. For example, certain diseases like diabetes, arthritis and dementia are common in older adults, which requires adequate medical support and care. Thus, all these are the challenges that the individuals and the nations may encounter as a result of increased average life expectancy.
Nevertheless, there are effective solutions to decrease the problems related to increase in life expectancy. Firstly, the government has to increase the pension age of working people and encourage the elderly to keep themselves busy with whatever they can do contributing their share to the development of the nation. Secondly, the health related problems of senior citizens can be addressed by giving them timely health checkups and necessary medical interventions.
In conclusion, even if, there are problems like pension burden and health hazards as people began to live longer, increase pension age and proper health assistance can help to cater such challenges.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43554006969 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86640378948 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554006968641 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6246162488 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.428571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6428571429 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161964670958 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560943729687 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440278659185 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977046735062 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370765382538 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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