Some people believe that it is essential to include physical education classes in the curriculum for all school age children. Others think that children's time is better spent on more academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
People have different views about whether the school should allocate more time for extra-curricular activities like physical education in their curriculum or should only focus on academic syllabus. Even though, students at school have a lot of subjects to study, I strongly believe that physical training should be a part of every curriculum because it keeps children not only healthy, but also zealous.
On the one hand, the prime reason to add physical education in every school curriculum is to keep the children physically fit and healthy. The students who actively participate in physical activities like sports and other games will get plenty of exercise to burn out extra calories from their body. As a result, the risk of obesity and other lifestyle disorders like diabetes and heart diseases will be reduced. For instance, these days most of the children are interested to spend their leisure time playing video games rather than outdoor games, so, physical hours in school are mandatory to keep such student energetic and healthy. Apart from that physical education also play a role to identify talented children in various sports activities. For instance, if a student performs extraordinary in any sport items, the physical educator can give more guidance and training to the particular student and make him more successful sports person in the future. Thus, it should be mandatory to include physical activities in schools to promote health as well as well being of each student.
On the other hand, some people argue that the only goal of school is to give education, not other activities. They think that, in this competitive world, education is the only way that help their children not only in acquiring knowledge, but also to get a better career in the future. For example, if a child spent maximum time for learning subjects in school, can score well in exams. Consequently, get a better opportunity to continue education in any reputed university, which help them to have a better future.
In conclusion, after discussing the both views in details, I strongly believe that, even if, learning subjects are pivotal in the educational process, all schools should also promote extra curricular activities to keep the student physically healthy, energetic and enthusiastic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, thus, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21621621622 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73921818942 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502702702703 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.6619703813 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.857142857 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4285714286 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327386642272 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115063206252 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513743259404 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199574530906 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306961038187 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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