In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations.
Never has the elderly population been as concerned as today. People in developed countries can live longer than ever before due to several factors such as the development in medical technology and food supplies. Although this trend may cause many drawbacks for the individuals and society there are some solutions that the government can apply to handle this problem.
The rise in average life expectancy will definitely cause a lot of negative effects. Firstly, it will lead to the growth in the number of people who are eligible to access the retirement pension, therefore the government must increase the taxes on working people to compensate for the state budget. In short, an aging population means a greater burden on young adults. Also, hospitals and health centre will be put on more pressure due to the fact that the demand for healthcare increases. More young people will have to work as doctors or nurses, which may cause a crisis of employees for other fields.
To resolve the problem of increasing life expectancy, the government can take several actions to tackle the effects of the aging population. Firstly, they can consider increasing the retirement age because nowadays, many retired people still have proper health feel healthy enough to proceed to work and contribute to the economy. Also, the residents should be encouraged to have more children or the government can encourage immigration in order to increase the number of young workers.
In conclusion, an aging population will cause several problems for the community but the government can still control its effects by taking reasonable measures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, still, therefore, as to, in conclusion, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20152091255 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68495992829 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570342205323 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7184867315 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20977199166 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792542808345 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597266396804 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128923116375 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397402783138 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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