Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel this is a positive trend, while others do not.
What are your opinion on this?
Never has fast food been as ubiquitous as today. Yet, there remains some disagreements as to whether this trend is positive or negative. I personally believe both views are valid and fast food is a double-edged sword.
On the one hand, it is an indisputable fact that fast food has revolutionized the way people eat. In the past, preparing a meal entailed long hours going to the market and cooking in the kitchen. Now, however, people only need to wait a few minutes at the fast food restaurant like KFC, Lotteria to enjoy a delicious meal. This is especially helpful and convenient for those who are always under a massive amount of work and have less time to cook. Moreover, fast food is tastier and more affordable than a conventional meal and definitely, it is more nutritious than instant noodle, which is a common choice for teenagers.
On the other hand, consuming excess fast food results in several serious health problems. Foods such as fried chicken, hamburgers, and pizzas – which are high in salt and fat – are responsible for obesity, diabetes, heart disease and cancer. So, although fast food is reasonably priced and convenient the cost and inconvenience of treating diseases in the later life is significant. In other words, maybe fast food is beneficial in the short term, its long-term effects are detrimental.
By the way of conclusion, I think that although fast food is a good choice for busy workers or students who live on a budget due to its low cost and convenience, I believe that the government should make campaigns to raise the awareness about the negative effects of fast food in particular or junk food in general.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, as to, i think, in general, in particular, such as, by the way, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88028169014 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78978808799 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591549295775 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4663401447 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.615384615 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202517528613 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754284473853 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047780954878 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131025895888 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496050629533 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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