The development of medical science has undoubtedly improved the average life expectancy in developed countries. And, this will pose some issues in the near future, however, the governments can take some measures to tackle this kind of problem as seen.
As people are getting better health facilities, they are living longer than ever and it may cause several problems that need to be considered soon before it’s too late. Firstly, the huge population of the country will get older, thus the proportion of young labor will decrease. This means that the pension needs to be delivered to more persons, while the amount of taxes, which is one of the main sources of the pension, will surely decrease due to the lack of young labors and taxpayers. The pressure of financial burden will affect the whole nation and the youths have to pay more taxes to the government to maintain the balance between the revenue generated and expenses. And, it might also be the challenge for young individuals to take care of their old parents or relatives and also earn at the same time.
In order to deal with the above obstacles, authorities can take several steps as discussed ahead. Above all, increasing the retirement age from 60 to 70 can help a lot to control the aged population. Nowadays, senior citizens are good enough to complete their jobs due to better health care. Another solution would be to simplify the immigration policies in order to increase the number of younger generations who are supposed to pay taxes, hence the financial status of the country will become strong. Furthermore, the usage of national funds needs to be redistributed. More money should be spent on vital healthcare, accommodation, and transportation rather than some leisure facilities, for example.
To sum up, a large number of the aged population poses potential problems that can be successfully handled by making some policy modifications by the governments of the concerned nations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07076923077 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77273965729 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609230769231 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8098590646 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.714285714 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232402774486 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702784144211 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538825367916 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146173136652 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717673053832 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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