By the progress technology and spread of the communication media, the tendency to following identical fashion, advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channels are increasing among people all around the world. Although this trend may impact on some cultures that countries inherited from their ancestors, it drives the world towards unification. In my opinion, the advantages of globalization are far better off its disadvantages.
Globalization provides this opportunity for countries to share their culture and habits with other countries. Indeed, due to people learn about other nations, they can choose their lifestyle according to their tendencies. Furthermore, in trade, they can profit from varieties of goods that supply in whole the world. For instance, this phenomenon could encourage healthy competition and avoid any kind of monopoly in the market, plus that, people all around the world would be able to access high-quality goods and affordable. Hence, people can benefit from the advantages of share fashions, advertising, marks, food habits and TV channels.
On the other hand, every new altered that occurs in human life has its own disadvantages. The elimination of differences between countries cause to some cultures that were significant for prior generations would be considered negligible, so that this issue has seriously damaged the culture of many countries. For instance, the concept of some movies which are inspired by other countries’ cultures is such as a break with tradition in many countries that raised the anger of many traditional people. In consequence, some culture that infiltrated to other countries are absolutely opposite to other cultures that make some problems.
Nowadays, the world has more turned into a "Global Village". While there are some drawbacks in the globalization, it finally causes that people all around the world achieve an identical lifestyle which is completely worthy. From my point of view, this integrating process is superior, despite some break with the past which can be had.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 42, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...owadays, the world has more turned into a 'Global Village'. While there...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, while, for instance, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52848101266 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0057944228 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556962025316 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4575415527 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.466666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201600397663 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068075027274 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554585846345 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127642075698 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603670869252 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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