In this modern age, large organization plays a fundamental role in order to build up the country economically condition. Nowadays, the bigger industry sector is growing rapidly in all around the world. Organization is the place, where employers and staffs operate their work activities day-to-day in order to earn profit for their company. However, I personally agree with that the company’s owner should get a large number of amount more than the employee’s of the company. In this essay, I will discuss the crucial factors between employer’s and employee’s of the large organization industry.
On the one hand, the bigger organization needs a huge amount of investment to make their business grow globally. As we all know that in this period there is a highly competitive market in all over the place. Consequently, to compete in this competitive world and an individual large company has to be invested in the machinery items, lands and buildings. For instance, lest’s take the example of KFC, Pizza hunt, Apple Inc, Samsung and much more. Moreover, this sector also has invested on their employee’s by giving them a good amount of salary and opportunity of promotion because this step will carry out the company to get innovative and creative ideas from their workers. Concurrently, this strategy will also make them more motivates and encourages on their staffs mindset. For example, As according to the richest person of China ‘Jack Ma’ statement in his talk show interview stated that if you wants to see growth and development in your organization or company and lead position on the top list, then hire young candidates because younger applicants can do better than you.
On the other hand, general labour like waiter, nurse, teacher and government worker works only for the living and provide service for the customers from their job sector and smuiltantly they they don't have to invest on anything for the company because they only work for their survival and to feed for their family members.
To sum up, I strongly believe with that the employer’s should inherit more amount of money than employee’s because they focus more to bring development, growth, target goals and creates innovation ideas and strategy for their organization.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...hat the company's owner should get a large number of amount more than the employee's of...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t to make their business grow globally. As we all know that in this period there i...
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...ket in all over the place. Consequently, to compete in this competitive world and...
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...tems, lands and buildings. For instance, lest's take the example of KFC, Piz...
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...t of salary and opportunity of promotion because this step will carry out the com...
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Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
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...er applicants can do better than you. On the other hand, general labour like w...
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...er, nurse, teacher and government worker works only for the living and provide se...
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...s from their job sector and smuiltantly they they dont have to invest on anything for the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27445652174 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96783794815 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570652173913 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.1142612083 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.642857143 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16433956285 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647517297536 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394259957726 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986367391471 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614676287752 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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