In the modern world of today, it is astonishing to contemplate how much popular drug has become, given that the enormous physical and mental damages it has had on individuals, especially young people. Therefore, this issue has become the sources of debate and a controversy among sociology scientists. I will discuss some visions and suggest the solution to deal with this problem.
Yet, despite behavioral science expert’s best efforts to educate people about the danger of drug abuse, it appears that the world does not want to listen. Furthermore, Medical specialists point out that, it is an unavoidable fact that regular consumption of narcotics is likely to be dangerous in the long term especially for youth. For example, drugs as any chemicals may adversely affect one’s ability to think and make valid judgements. Furthermore, it might badly affect one’s social behavior.
Another conspicuous fact is that, the young generation has a great tendency to imitate other people such as, the group of peers, family members, and celebrities that each of which could be a bad behavioral model. To instance, sometimes, the youngsters got trapped on, due to, they try to copy their relative’s manner on their life without knowing it's negative effects. Similarly, it is proved that almost three-quarters of drug addiction is the direct result of compulsion or motivation from similarly aged.
On the matter of recommendation to tackle this problem, we need to educate the youngsters about the defects and consequences of drug usage, and that should start from each person’s family itself. Moreover, governments should take adequate steps to avoid its wide reach especially to children and teenagers. Furthermore, law enforcement should give strict punishments to people who are ever doing this vicious crime.
In conclusion, the situation will never change with fragmented efforts or at least, it is going to take a long time, so people and the government should jointly work towards this aim before things are going out of our hands.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, at least, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33639143731 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94501922755 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642201834862 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2044798391 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.642857143 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121226996202 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379958388512 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338441665234 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0588500786354 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029271448656 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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