Discuss the pros and cons of using public transport
Nowadays, the population in the world is rising higher and higher. To solve this problem, many governments has encouraged people to use the public transport instead of their private vehicles. In my opinion, I think this solution has both plus and minus points to the user.
On the one hand, using public transport can reduce the amount of traffic jams and accidents. More people using buses to travel will lead to the decrease of private cars. And with fewer cars, we can lessen the emission, make the air cleaner to breathe and improve the community health. The fuel energy will also be saved and used efficiently for other industries.
On the other hand, there are some obvious drawbacks of using public transport that need to be taken in consideration. Firstly, private vehicles are more freedom. People who like listening to music, go to everywhere they want, etc will prefer driving their car to sitting quietly in an electric train. Secondly, in some countries, the facility of public transport is not safe enough for the demand of people, so instead of putting their life in a stranger’s hand, they choose to drive themselves.
In conclusion, using public transport have a lots of advantages to the environment, health and even economics, but the disadvantages would emerge in terms of less freedom and safety.
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Suggestion: a lot; lots
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99547511312 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66418638023 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62443438914 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2532955458 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246713945336 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887299128875 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905584897687 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152279550813 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019337138204 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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