Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People should relax with the ways related to their hobbies and physical activities which are different with their work.
it seems that, a few of people attend to some activities which can be defined as hobbies and physical activities can fill their free time. The hobbies or physical activities should not be related to their work. Because, they need an atmosphere different the space of their job, and it has positive effect on their social and personal skill. This essay attends to examine the two advantages of attending in the various space for them.
In the first step, from social perspective, it has been proved that some teem activities or community in the nature help to improve some social skill. In a way of explanation, mountain and jogging have been attracted by a vast range of individuals with serving breakfast and dinner in the nature. Besides, some this type of communities can shape and improve the communication skills. Although, some people who are staying at home are involving some psychological problem. For instance, in the England, swimming in the nature and having a run competition have been concerned by the government, and annually the most passenger from middle east are participated in these competitions in their free time. In particularly, in the summer whenever student finish their semester. So, one of advantage of participating some activities in the different space has positive exert on social communication skill.
Form personal perspective, the ones who are playing something in the different space of work can learn a valuable thing in the hobbies. There is a fact behind learning and decrease some personal ability in the hobbies. For example, some statistics have been shown by researcher that, some individuals sports like swimming and hiking have improved the mental activities between Australian. Moreover, teem game can prevented people from depression and psychological problem. Nonetheless, some polices in the developed countries about economic issue in context of work fill the free time of people. there is no doubt that, developing economical condition for every nation is a most important integral of the countries. If these countries spend chiefly their time and budget, they will gain excellent rating among of countries. To sum up, most psychologist believe that attempting to achieve great something by learning in the free time is the great successful issue for them.
Additionally, if the people do not have time, they should go to same places for spending their leisure time. To illustrate, a few successful managers in the US consist only four hours for their free time in the week. Because, the time, employee, and their office have been most part of their life. However, these volumes of the responsibilities may be harmful for their health. Moreover, a humankind belong to the nature and life expectancy in the society should be focused by every person. Consequently, responsibility and duties for managers are important but it has their disadvantages for them.
In conclusion, from social and personal aspects is agreeable that the community activities in the different space of the people’s job have exert magnitude impact on the vast dimension of the ones. this issue may not be obeyed by managers who are concerning for their time and responsibilities. And this issue should be beneficial for a successful person who follow the dream of the life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e and improve the communication skills. Although, some people who are staying at home ar...
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Suggestion: exerted
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...issue may not be obeyed by managers who are concerning for their time and responsibilities. An...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, no doubt, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 41.998997996 171% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2780.0 1615.20841683 172% => OK
No of words: 535.0 315.596192385 170% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19626168224 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80937282943 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92123879979 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459813084112 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 870.3 506.74238477 172% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2559233751 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2857142857 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1071428571 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215154518337 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646515919074 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751810550421 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132163140317 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723817529951 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.