Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment—doing things they like to do—rather than doing things they should do.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people argue that these days people are involved in activities which they enjoy most of their time instead of such things which can be useful for their future. However, I disagree with this statement. People have right to be happy in their life. And perhaps certain things seem not necessary from outside but for that person it could be imperative. In addition, people need time to distinguish what are their aims in their life.
I regularly read the quotes of successful people and it is really gives me motivation. We have to appreciate their attempts to open peoples’ eye trying to guide us how to success. During their speech they give precious advice to people and at the same time they mention and criticize about their bad habits. These actions, for instance spending money which they earn and hang out with friends on weekends are not the things they should do, they say. But if people feel satisfied and do not regret from this activities why they have to prevent themselves doing so. They have right to be happy.
People tend to be skeptical mostly and they consider that their brother or friend doing or has chosen not the right thing to success. They think it is not necessary for their dear one. But how they know what he/she like to do to be content of their action. We are human beings and naturally we do prefer something and not like something. And we do not need to explain everything to the people why we decide to do particular things. It can be psychologically imperative for them.
It is believed that after graduation people has to get a job or start their own business. And if something goes wrong people start to give advice from their own perspective not understanding the reasons why it is not going well for the time being. I think we need some time to find out what our passion in the life and do what is interesting to us. If people work in certain place only for a good wage and they hate that job, it is better to change their gig. So we have to be supportive and not judge strictly our mates, relatives and family members that they are not doing the right things.
Everyone has a right to be happy in our life and we have to do things what we love even sometimes it can look strange for others.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, really, so, well, as to, even so, for instance, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 24.0651302605 278% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1838.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49388753056 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35348838676 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466992665037 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.320002796 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9130434783 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7826086957 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31765710929 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106893680956 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822090730845 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200288225047 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754628312776 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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