Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment—doing things they like to do—rather than doing things they should do.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people argue that these days people are involved in activities which they enjoy most of their time instead of such things which can be useful for their future. However I disagree with this statement. People have right to be happy in their life. And perhaps certain things seem not necessary from outside but for that person it could be imperative. In addition people need time to distinguish what are their aims in their life.
I regularly read the quotes of successful people and it is really gives me motivation. We have to appreciate their attempts to open peoples’ eye trying to guide us how to success. During their speech they give precious advice to people and at the same time they mention and criticize about their bad habits. This actions, for instance spending money which they earn and hang out with friends on weekends are not the things they should do, they say. But if people feel satisfied and do not regret from this activities why they have to prevent themselves doing so. They have right to be happy.
People tend to be skeptical mostly and they consider that their brother or friend doing or has chosen not the right thing to success. They think it is not necessary for their dear one. But how they know what he/she like to do to be content of their action. We are human beings and naturally we do prefer something and not like something. And we do not need to explain everything to the people why we decide to do particular things. It can be psychologically imperative for them.
It is believed that after graduation people has to get a job or start their own business. And if something goes wrong people start to give advice from their own perspective not understanding the reasons why it is not going well for the time being. I think we need some time to find out what our passion in the life and do what is interesting to us. If people work in certain place only for a good wage and they hate that job, it is better to change their gig. So we have to be supportive and not judge strictly our mates, relatives and family members that they are not doing the right things.
Everyone has a right to be happy in our life and we have to do things what we love even sometimes it can look strange for others.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...s which can be useful for their future. However I disagree with this statement. People ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
... that person it could be imperative. In addition people need time to distinguish what ar...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...n and criticize about their bad habits. This actions, for instance spending money wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, really, so, well, as to, even so, for instance, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48655256724 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3460520885 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466992665037 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3541271194 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7826086957 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7826086957 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31736100394 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106893680956 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822090730845 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199796368235 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748730615742 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.