Experimentation on animals is crucial in current era, where practical guidance is essential for attaining knowledge. I believe practical orientation is prime essential for achieving the best education, which is not possible without animal experimentation and assistance for attaining the same.
As a medical student i can vouch for the scientific experiments that are essential means of understanding which are approachable through animal experiments. Animals like rabbits, rats, mice, snakes, frogs some varieties of birds, guinea pigs are essential for experiments. They form the basis of the pharmacological industry, which is crucial for the economy of the medical unit and health inductry of the country. Not only do they help in determining the chemistry of medicines, they help as the initial step of trial of any drug which will be the forefront medicine of various diseases in humans. Animals play not only a scientific role, their role in cosmetic industry has also been questionable to many. Currently trending famous products like MAC, makeup forever have beenblamed for their animal exploitations.
Alternatives to animals could be by trials on viruses and bacteria. Currently, humans polyclonal cells and animal cells have been used for testing thus breaking the old school conservatism. I have come across how usage of technology and chips have been quite helpful in decreasing animal exploitation. Cruelty free and peta acts have made it essential for scientists to break the old format of cheap feasable usage of live forms and thus replacing them with much standardized modes
Old school methods have been quite economical, yet newer techniques gaurantee better outcome. Thus combination of the two increases the positivity without delaying the medical progress and lesser human risk.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51798561151 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02110307944 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615107913669 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.925151077 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.38461538462 7.06120827912 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224777759535 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854895585757 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539309272143 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125436130987 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840058785683 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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