Do you think it is better for students to work before their university study? Why? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.
It is common nowadays for young people to take a gap year working before going to the university. Many people argued that having a job before higher education brings no benefits for students. However, in my perspective, i strongly believe that the mentioned notion is totally beneficiary for students. The following essay will examine the reasons for my viewpoint.
There is no denying that working before university facilitates students figure out which jobs are appropriate to them. Many youngsters leave high school without determining their future career. Therefore, they choose to try out various jobs to deliberately decide what they dislike and get down-to-earth to what they really passionate about. Furthermore, many students suffer from stress and anxiety after the graduate exam; hence, they need a year of relaxation to balance their lives before embarking to the college journey.
We may point out the indisputable fact that working before tertiary education brings the young a fully-equipped preparation for their university life in the future. As they meet a number of people and engage with different tasks in their jobs, they gain confidence and improve their social skills significantly, which are crucial factors in the holistic environment of university. Besides, having a jobs in the adjournment enables students save a amount of money to pay for the higher education, which is a real pressure to many people.
In conclusion, taking a year out for working benefits the young a lot as a preparation for their future academic journey and lifelong career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, really, so, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.316 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89470965729 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9734768544 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.75 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196952762414 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788875497706 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446333714604 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126137021426 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0123768406944 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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