Do you think that people who work online at home are more productive than office workers or the other way around? Give reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the past, it is common that people have to travel for their workplace and spent about half of the day with their work colleagues. However, as a result of advanced technology, online work from home culture has seen a significant rise in recent decades. In my opinion work from home brings many positive and productive changes in the personal life of employee than people who work in the office.
First and foremost, people save travel time which is most cases stressful for their physical and mental health and whoever experienced this matter complained that they spent about to 2 hours with traffic congestion and loud noises of vehicles. Secondly, working online at home gives the freedom to hang out more time with the family to provide workers to become more supportive and productive day. They are simply able to organize a work schedule which is more convenient for employees to handle other household chore list like washing dishes, preparing meals, doing laundry and taking care of their kids. Moreover, online work at home enables the chance of thinking positive and having independent ideas are more important for employees to develop their productivity and capability to communicate with their senior employers. occasionally, when employees work in the office they do not have the chance to do their own tasks because of other employee’s interferes and sharing the ideas with them is a disadvantage for them.
On the other hand, working from home some times feels stressful because of mixing with household activities and office tasks can be disorganized. In addition, failure in any work tasks could result in disappointing atmosphere at home and obviously they will feel isolation in their work life.
In conclusion, my point of view that online work at home definitely brings individual’s life more convenient and it allows to organize and handle their work tasks more easily with the productive outcome along with freedom of personal life and having a quality time with their family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17021276596 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7202305922 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522796352584 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.1617108897 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.636363636 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9090909091 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3636363636 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275057311193 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123779427991 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711497326425 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17388729772 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415356634409 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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