The mass media, including TV, radio and newspapers, have great influence in shaping people's ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer.
In this complex world, the mass media have become so popular among society. So, most individuals nowadays follow and use them constantly. From the early ages, newspapers, radio and television have become famous and modern age internet also obviously gives a great influence in shaping people’s idea.
First and foremost, mass media is one of the best options to create connectivity between people and it cause the globalization among the people. Nowadays anyone can see the world by connecting to the internet or watching television. They can see what happens in other countries and learn about their culture and traditional background like how they dress up and what they eating. Also, individuals can learn the history of any other country and compare the cultural differences between their own country.
Secondly, mass media are playing the role of giving information to the society by daily news on the television and radio which is more convenient to each individual to get aware of what’s happening in the living world. This information is really useful to each person to their knowledge and brushes up their mind full of information. Many useful educational programs and documentaries are going on the television and radio nowadays that’s why young generation are keen to get knowledge and information by those media to complete their school projects or assignments in the university.
Moreover, extending and developing the mass media can be more helpful to adults as well. Some TV shows and movies always give grate advice to the whole society and telecasting documentaries like crime watch will definitely make the people live much better and teach them how to be a salutary person.
In conclusion, I completely agree that mass media is the best option to have a great influence in shaping people’s ideas and it would be more useful to society in the future as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21359223301 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83646942558 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563106796117 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5629686899 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.923076923 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209482472404 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738205383785 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682983198592 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127959302724 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654211423207 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.