Does modern technology make life more convenient, or was life better when technology was simpler?
Nowadays, the modern technology has become compulsory part in our life by collaborating with transportation, food processing ect and multifarious option. There is an argument that the advance technology makes life more compacted with computers and robots where as others believe that modern technology makes life more convenient.
First of all, communication with each other by using mobile phones and computers the new generation always But in the past people did face difficulties when they communication was face with lot difficulties in the past ear.beside there are so many machines and equipment invented, perform activities us to do the things that we really can do easily and effectively. There is a belief, that internet is a multi functional and it’s really useful in both good ways and bad way, by logging to the web browser and searching the whole world withing the reach of your table in a minute, take online studies from top class universities, communicate with our friends and family members having actual talk with them face to face on the computer. Secondly, the transport system has developed making lot of convenient for people to travel far or near, saving lot of time and energy. Public transport systems like trains, planes are very important to people to travel thousand miles within shot durAtion .
On the flip side, the negative effects on modern technology has created havoc in the modern world For instance some countries use new technology to produce dangerous weapons and others producing dangerous machinery and chemicals to destruction of rain forest and ruin the areas where factories and industries located to build the factories and other industrial area sing use the internet in the negative ways which has become an unfortunat situation entire world right now like cyber bullying and scammers. This is an unfortunate situation which happen to the world right now.
In my point of view is that, the modern technology can be precious thing to develop day by day and help to the human to do their life activities easily and that could be lead to have luxurious living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14450867052 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75949503464 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583815028902 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.459603236 49.4020404114 280% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 197.777777778 106.682146367 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.4444444444 20.7667163134 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235036779674 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09781396217 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130615490831 0.0667982634062 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157816896086 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144053552955 0.056905535591 253% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.0 13.0946893788 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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