Does a certain type of music effects young children's learning? Agree/Disagree
It is always seen that listening to music occupies children mind leaving less space for learning. This has become a serious problem nowadays when children are more prone to gadgets which is destroying their learning.
Listening to music all the time can effects once brain as it will create pressure on brain leaving brain stressed. In a recent study it is proved that indulging in music can effect the brain upto 60%.
Moreover, if the child is busy in music he will be less involved in exploring other things of the world. Doing a single task may reduce its ability to do multi tasks.
In conclusion it is clear from this that children involved in music have less scope to learn other different things. I totally agree music affects youngsters learning capabilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 41.998997996 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 640.0 1615.20841683 40% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 132.0 315.596192385 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84848484848 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38956122427 4.20363070211 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44155748212 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 176.041082164 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674242424242 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 189.9 506.74238477 37% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.4927313295 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.0 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201972961028 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887332109561 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610388354704 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112791634907 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705661953742 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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