Essay topics:
Hotel Management
The Speaker was discussing hotel management. Firstly, he mentioned the duties of General Manager In the organization. General Manager should have skills in leadership and decision making and is responsible for directing other department managers on their duties. He then talked about Controller who is responsible for the organizations accounting and Payroll related work. Finally, he talks about sales manager responsibilities in the organization.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 323, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'organizations'' or 'organization's'?
Suggestion: organizations'; organization's
...t Controller who is responsible for the organizations accounting and Payroll related work. Fi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 20.9802955665 19% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 31.9359605911 22% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 385.0 1207.87684729 32% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 64.0 242.827586207 26% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.015625 5.00649968141 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.82842712475 3.92707691288 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37496383082 2.71678728327 124% => OK
Unique words: 46.0 139.433497537 33% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.71875 0.580463131201 124% => OK
syllable_count: 121.5 379.143842365 32% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6551724138 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.5024630542 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4522858458 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 104.977214359 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8 20.9669160288 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291237725679 0.242375264174 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142533745089 0.0925447433944 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741187330188 0.071462118173 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291237725679 0.151781067708 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.75 11.5310837438 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.4 8.32886699507 125% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 55.0591133005 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.3980295567 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.5123152709 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 22.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 90
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