Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
We live in an age where due to the rapid commencement of business models like super convenient stores many small retailer shops, and in-house businesses are on the brink of disappearance, whilst some people think that closing up of local businesses and factories will threaten the livelihood of a large number of people. Albeit being one of the pressing matters these days, neither I completely disagree nor agree. The following essay supports both businesses.
The business model of a supermarket or convenience store is far more advance and better than a retail shop. The commencement of a superstore in a society can be very beneficial both for customers and store owners. These stores provide numerous facilities like availability of all daily use products stacked on racks of a single shop, price comparison between different manufacturers, fancy products, attractive offers, and even bigger discounts on special days. They also promote international brands as well. Shopping from these stores can be much more stress-free than retails shops.
As, every coin has two sides to it, with this rapid advancement of this business model the local small-scaled retail shops and showrooms are not able to compete with them mainly because of the volume of investment they put it in. The convenient stores are just made much more fanciers than shops so that they can attract customers. If somehow this trend does not get changed, it can be life-threatening to the local market and small-scale companies, thus leading to a rise in unemployment. What is more, there are numerous advantages of shopping from retail shops as well, they always sell more fresh and new products, promotes locally made products which can be helpful to the economy. Moreover, being a retailer of a particular product the variety which can be found here is unmatchable.
With all things considered, I am in favour of both business models whether to open a superstore or a particular product's showroom. Both of the models have their own pros and cons. In fact, what I believe is that a superstore should be opened where no other retail shops are already present, this will somehow save a conflict between them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 296, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ctories will threaten the livelihood of a large number of people. Albeit being one of the pressin...
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Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... advance and better than a retail shop. The commencement of a superstore in a socie...
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Line 7, column 113, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'products'' or 'product's'?
Suggestion: products'; product's
...er to open a superstore or a particular products showroom. Both of the models have their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, thus, well, in fact, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09470752089 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85325978389 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590529247911 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.2684403931 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.3125 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4375 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5625 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156035497456 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450375839865 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748510961019 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105703054327 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838184973465 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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