Due to human activities on land and in the sea, the animals are becoming extinct.
What are the reasons and solutions?
Currently, many of animal species are becoming endangered. In both terrestrial and coastal areas. This is mainly caused by the increasing number of people eating fish and the development of housing areas. Therefore, fish extensive farming and establish vertical housing are the practically implemented solution to solve those issues.
Two ways of human activities disturbing animal habitats in the land on the sea are the demand for fish consumption and shelters. As fish is well-known for its high protein, contents, more people seem to be considered to consume fish regularly in a great amount. This gives to rise to the number of people eating fish more healthily as well as living longers. The more people live longer, the more houses they need. For example, the benefits of eating fish should decrease the population, many people in Japan stay smart and healthy, so they have a habit of eating fish every day. Japan reach many fish imports from Indonesia sea. About 65 % of various fish a huge number making destroy of big disaster in the sea. Many coral and natural resources decrease gradually. In the other hand, massively harvesting of fish has an increment of inhabitants. So, overpopulation caused in highly people unbalanced with land area. Then for reducing exploitation for housing making the vertical houses. To implement this solution, the Government in Japan give the by far the high pricey for buying homes. The achievement office stakeholders for making those rules.
What can be done to tackle this issue? Two major effective solutions are to adopt fish extensive farming as well as build vertical houses. The reason for this is to sustain. The group of fish in a coastal area getting a dramatic decline due to significant demand of fish consumed. What is more, vertical housing is believed to minimize the use of lands caused by overpopulation massively requiring more shelters. The benefit of making profit income and stable economics as well as the environment. A developed country such as Indonesia has high awareness to save natural resources. So, they build many fish cultivation. They consume terrestrial aquascape namely catfish, because of its strongest and struggle. Therefore, they just need less budget then developed catfish, popular fish in Indonesian food street market. Besides, reducing exploration of nature. Indonesia has built infrastructure complex housing, with vertical houses.
To sum up, human error and exploitation of endangered habitats. Grounds on awareness of natural resources making significant action for saving area in housing as well as making nature cultivation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 587, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Japan) must be used with a third-person verb: 'reaches'.
Suggestion: reaches
...a habit of eating fish every day. Japan reach many fish imports from Indonesia sea. A...
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Line 5, column 749, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
.... Therefore, they just need less budget then developed catfish, popular fish in Indo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, then, therefore, well, for example, such as, as well as, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2211.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 416.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31490384615 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82284043743 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504807692308 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 699.3 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 16.0721442886 193% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8751763898 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3225806452 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4193548387 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.12903225806 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117608583215 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0315492435009 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053968430056 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0672912580896 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211907767892 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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