Advertising is commonly found what are the advantages and disadvantages of advertising?
One tool to promote products is through an advertising campaign. While advertising contains some merits the demerits outweigh the perceived benefits.
The positive impact of advertisement is the best way of modern business through media information based ads on TV, website, social media, and the internet. For example, many ads of skin care products, but namely most popular is SK-II product made in Japan for healthy skin, glowing, and anti-aging skin care. Advertising is a creative industry that employs many people contributed. How to use the best product of SK-II? Demonstrate by an actress. The famous and beauty artist such as Susan Bachtiar as a brand ambassador of SK-II in Indonesia. Content creators make a scenario, and technician manage of technical resource as well as marketing promote the products. Because of, without advertising, women get confused and no have a choice to select the skin care products.
By contrast, most people experienced to get underestimated because of advertising. Basically, advertising manipulates people, branding the products with the commercial photo. Most of the food advertised not do match real. For example, Burger in the photo of McDonald's, look like bigger, tick meat, with many slices of cheese and vegetables While in fact, just mini burger with thin meat and a few of lettuce. It always makes children put pressure on parents to buy them things. Due to they are given added toys such as Toys meal menu. Also, children have a big expectation and can easily be influenced by the commercial photo on many through media information. Moreover, they give big bombastic with brand ambassador influence. They use glamorous, successful people. It persuades people to buy products and be consumptive.
To sum up, making advertising in public is a good idea because it is an alternative rule While they have demerits with advertising.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, moreover, so, well, while, as to, for example, in fact, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26158940397 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91775220442 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599337748344 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2097666316 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6666666667 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.380952381 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90476190476 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124164464625 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427031816644 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621492661626 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101321143425 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500390434774 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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